You are getting your news report back because several of you could benefit from another crack at it.
The number one issue is lack of focus. Many have strong leads, but the bodies do not build off the lead. Instead, you start retelling the episodes main events.
EVERYTHING MUST RELATE BACK TO YOUR HEADLINE. Once you write your lead, backtrack. What events lead to that? What does this mean for the community? Have any issues arisen because of this event?
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