News Report Peer Review

We're going to take the first 10-15 minutes to peer review:

Please answer, right on your peer's paper:

1. Does the lead get right to the point? Explain.
2. Does the headline sum up the article?
3. Is the report written like current news--not simply a description of what happens in the episode?
4. Are quotes use appropriately?
5. Does the body elaborate on the "what" introduced in the lead? Or is it all over the place? Explain

Correct grammatical errors as you see them.

Remember the expectations while working:
1. This is independent
2. Be THOROUGH in your responses
3. If you something doesn't make sense, don't tell me, don't tell your peer--simply write that it doesn't make sense on their paper.